Well this sucks...

I'm surprised I am posting this on my blog, for all to see, instead of just e-mailing it privatley. I guess self critisism, or judgement, or destruction, or whatever you want to call this is easy for me... I'm not sure if that's good or a bad.

Shot 1
Voice:
      -too quiet
      -too fast
      -No anonciation 
      -unatural quivering (forced emotion)
Face:
      -Dead eyes
      -No clear focus
      -tense

Shot 2
Voice: 
      -valley girlish
      -inappropiate for the character
      -anonciation and speed!
Face:
     -head shaking/fidgety
     -spastic eyebrows
     -too much blinking

Shot 3
Voice:
      -Awkward breathing
      -Breathy words
Face:
      -too much blinking
      -ingenuine smile
      -sense of lacking confidence= wrong for the character

Shot 4
Voice:
      -too rythmic and melodic
      -rushed
      -slurred
Face:
      -swaying
      -dead eyes
      -too much or too little smiling

Shot 5
Voice:
      -Annonciation
      -lacking emotion/variation
Face:
      -No eye contact
      -blinking
      -lack of connection

Shot 6
Voice:
      -to much for film acting
      -doesnt flow well with the other scenes
Face:
      -TOO MUCH BLINKING
      -awkwardly tense neck

Shot 7
Voice:
      -Dragging
      -Uncommitted emotion wise
Face:
      -No eye contact
      -Shaking head
      -twitching eyebrow

Shot 8
Voice:
      -SO quiet
      -no variation
      -robotic
      -repetative
Face:
      -Dead eyes
      -Unclear
      -eye contact
      -bored/tired

Shot 9:
Voice:
      -Pauses/hesitations
      -Unconvincing
Face:
      -Blinking
      -Blikning
      -BLINKING

Shot 10:
Voice:
      -Unnatural
      -Effected
Face: 
      -BLINKING!!!!!!!
      -No expression in eyes

Shot 11:
Voice:
      -Monotone
      -hard to understand
      -Lost
Face:
      -Dull
      -No eye contact
      -Relaxed completley